Kia ora Mikayla, How are you? You were using some feeling words that helped me get a picture in my mind when you were writing about colours. You mentioned the 'breeze in your face' and the 'crinkly leaves in autumn.' I love listening to the crinkly leaves when I walk. Have a great day.
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Kia ora Mikayla,
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You were using some feeling words that helped me get a picture in my mind when you were writing about colours. You mentioned the 'breeze in your face' and the 'crinkly leaves in autumn.' I love listening to the crinkly leaves when I walk.
Have a great day.