its is my hero and villain story that my teacher gave me this story that i have made over the week i hop you all enjoy today .thank you for reading my story.
Hi Mikayla, I know how much time and effort you've put into this. Thanks for sharing. Well done for using speech marks when people speak. I can also see that you used our new word - "intentions" in your writing too.
I'm very interested to find out what the underground lab is like. Can you describe what you can feel/ smell/ see/ hear in there? After Hamburger Girl stops Hamburger boy, did he turn back into a hero?
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Hi Mikayla, I know how much time and effort you've put into this. Thanks for sharing. Well done for using speech marks when people speak. I can also see that you used our new word - "intentions" in your writing too.
ReplyDeleteI'm very interested to find out what the underground lab is like. Can you describe what you can feel/ smell/ see/ hear in there? After Hamburger Girl stops Hamburger boy, did he turn back into a hero?
he did turn back into a hero
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